Okay, so the monsters are really mad at our little critter now since he hurt one of their own. No more toying around with him. While he's still dazed from his sudden fall the left one goes in for the kill. We see it's mouth get bigger until black fills the screen. Cut to the girly critter falling from her pod. She's got a smaller body with longer slender nubby things. She falls into water and slowly sinks to the bottom. Awaiting her is an elegant plant monster. They struggle, but eventually the plant gets the best of her and stuffs her down it's hole in the ground. I know this isn't as exciting as the tube monster sequence, I might have to spice it up. Cut to the fat creature falling. He's got a really big body and tiny nubbies. You can think of the first guy as the hero, the second one as the love interest, and the third as the lovable comic relief. Except all this love and comedy doesn't really play out, so forget it. So the fat guy falls onto a really big fat monster, with bulbous protrusions. He bounces off and lands nearby to the left. Their in a kind of field of these fat monsters. He notices the monster, and slowly tries to roll away, screen right. (not pictured) The other nubby creatures can hop, but our fat guy here just rolls. But the monster sees the fat critter and suddenly sprays him with a thick gooey liquid. Close up of our guy, covered in this gooey stuff. He tries to move, but it becomes obvious that the goo is too sticky to let him go anywhere. He's trapped. Cut wide, and we see the monster jump on our guy, the goo splatters out. Cut to the ground under the monster, and we see that our guy isn't smooshed, but is in fact forced down a hole in ground. In the wide shots of this sequence there will be faint circles on the ground - these turn out to be tunnels like the one our guy gets forced down. So we see him slide down this tunnel and land in a huge stomach with our other critters. The stomach is probably bigger than pictured. The other critters are surprised and then happy to see him, and they all hug. Then they all droop, dejected looking, and they all sort of look up, and camera pans to the only way out, which was their way in. (not pictured). So the graceful one starts to climb the textured wall, but is quickly foiled because the wall pulses and throws her off. She probably tries a few more times until she gives up. Then the fat one tries to roll up the sloping sides of the stomach, but the stomach wall bumps him back. Then the they try stacking on top of each other, with the hero on the top, trying to jump up. He jumps higher and higher each time, but doesn't quite make it....... stay tuned for page 3.
Okay, so the monsters are really mad at our little critter now since he hurt one of their own. No more toying around with him. While he's still dazed from his sudden fall the left one goes in for the kill. We see it's mouth get bigger until black fills the screen. Cut to the girly critter falling from her pod. She's got a smaller body with longer slender nubby things. She falls into water and slowly sinks to the bottom. Awaiting her is an elegant plant monster. They struggle, but eventually the plant gets the best of her and stuffs her down it's hole in the ground. I know this isn't as exciting as the tube monster sequence, I might have to spice it up. Cut to the fat creature falling. He's got a really big body and tiny nubbies. You can think of the first guy as the hero, the second one as the love interest, and the third as the lovable comic relief. Except all this love and comedy doesn't really play out, so forget it. So the fat guy falls onto a really big fat monster, with bulbous protrusions. He bounces off and lands nearby to the left. Their in a kind of field of these fat monsters. He notices the monster, and slowly tries to roll away, screen right. (not pictured) The other nubby creatures can hop, but our fat guy here just rolls. But the monster sees the fat critter and suddenly sprays him with a thick gooey liquid. Close up of our guy, covered in this gooey stuff. He tries to move, but it becomes obvious that the goo is too sticky to let him go anywhere. He's trapped. Cut wide, and we see the monster jump on our guy, the goo splatters out. Cut to the ground under the monster, and we see that our guy isn't smooshed, but is in fact forced down a hole in ground. In the wide shots of this sequence there will be faint circles on the ground - these turn out to be tunnels like the one our guy gets forced down. So we see him slide down this tunnel and land in a huge stomach with our other critters. The stomach is probably bigger than pictured. The other critters are surprised and then happy to see him, and they all hug. Then they all droop, dejected looking, and they all sort of look up, and camera pans to the only way out, which was their way in. (not pictured). So the graceful one starts to climb the textured wall, but is quickly foiled because the wall pulses and throws her off. She probably tries a few more times until she gives up. Then the fat one tries to roll up the sloping sides of the stomach, but the stomach wall bumps him back. Then the they try stacking on top of each other, with the hero on the top, trying to jump up. He jumps higher and higher each time, but doesn't quite make it....... stay tuned for page 3.
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